You've clearly put some work into this and that's great.
I'm not sure what you want help with though - do you just want someone to finish this project for you?
I hate to say this, but I'm pretty certain that this will not be made into the sequel to DROD RPG. One of the reasons is that your story and ideas do not fit with the current DROD world and storyline.
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×For example, Slayers are created in vats by the Empire, so there's no way Beethro could have gone to school with one. There are no TVs in the Eighth. Both 39th Slayer and the Neather are dead.
Also, be careful with the graphics you use. I don't think you have permission to use the Slayer picture and Caravel logo and these are copyrighted images.
Why don't you remove the images and finish off the project and then people can play it and tell you what they think?
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