Malarame wrote:
That's almost an overload of -ing. Quite a few adjectives in there, and it paints a pretty descriptive picture. I'm assuming that's from a bigger poem (maybe called "The King of the Skies"), but I don't know who it's by. The_Red_Hawk must either like birds a lot, or he likes that poe a lot.
I made it up myself.
Egg Egg, do you like shirts?
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Slashing, whirling, diving, twirling,
Snapping, turning, rising, swirling,
Screeching, flipping, gliding, sliding,
The red hawk's dance of death.
.....the king of the skies.....