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Welcome to the submission thread for the April Bluffhanger contest. If you wish to discuss the contest, or review the description, rules and guidelines, click here. Be sure to use the correct unhidetime and secret text formatting for your submission.

[unhidetime=April 24, 2009 7:00PM]Cliffhanger sentence here.

[secret]Resolution sentence here.[/secret][/unhidetime]
04-04-2009 at 03:04 AM
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Forlorn amongst a thousand thorns, whilst sunset shon the eager light, his heart remorsed for such mistakes, of yester-year and now before, his eyes had set, primordial raw, just beauty now, all that he'd dreamt, a sleek and slender urge of yore, he knew that she, he would adore.

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04-04-2009 at 03:26 AM
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The resonant rumblings of methane melded with the low grumblings of ninety-six stomachs and were all that could be heard that evening before the bulging grey clouds scattered like panicked, fluffy bunnies and a dozen whirring, sleek, silvery saucers plummeted towards the pristine and premium pasture.

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04-04-2009 at 06:16 AM
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Gleefully happy to at last to be out of the darkness of the cold, damp, oppressive cave, and feeling he now had a real chance of surviving this, Sam took a deep breath only to find that the air was rank and over powering with the smell of Sulfur, and he was not really out either, and what had appeared at first to be an exit had in fact left him at the bottom of a deep long trench, now holding his breath the seconds ticked by, his lungs burned as he contemplated what he must do now.

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04-04-2009 at 07:11 AM
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Matt was climbing to the top of the Mount Blank,when suddenly rock he dragged fallen down! Matt was holding one small rock with only one hand. When suddenly..

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04-05-2009 at 02:57 PM
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The Grand Emperor (as in the guy who ruled the country, not some random guy who'd just given himself a title) decided that he wanted eggs for breakfast and sent a totally and utterly trusted messenger to the kitchens.

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04-05-2009 at 08:56 PM
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The whole event must have taken no longer than 3 seconds; as he ran and mashed the unbroken Mode button three times between gasps of pain to disarm the alarm, a person crafted in the likeness of hippopotamuses charged from behind into his limp ankle, toppling over like one of the two bowling pins in a 7-10 split...
...and so it was 8:28 PM, the only thing standing between Hugo and the field being a balding (shaven?) Mex thug, enraged like a honeybee when you detach one of its wings.

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04-06-2009 at 12:19 AM
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As Jane looked at her baby, three months after the father's disappearance, she couldn't help but wonder if he would ever be found.
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04-06-2009 at 07:22 PM
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The forces of Moma marched on the capital wearing the snazziest uniforms that money could buy and all the citzens got down on their toes and wept as the army grew closer.

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04-06-2009 at 10:37 PM
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Dropping his shield, the one in his right hand with the green serpent emblazoned on the front and the little mark on the bottom right corner (if you were looking at it from the front) that if you squinted carefully might have been a stylized 'A', he made a mad dash for the stairs.

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04-11-2009 at 06:06 AM
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Apologies if this is too cliched. (Is it possible to be too cliched in a bad-writing contest?)

So when Jackson threw down his harpoon and said, "We're not getting out of this alive," and I was forced to evaluate the situation objectively, hearing the distant drone of helicopters and the starting of the tanks of the amassed forces outside our igloo, and feeling the chill seeping through my fishnet-and-linen clothing, I realized that I had to agree.

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04-12-2009 at 12:58 AM
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Fascinated by the furious rolls, whose corresponding thunder was gloomily dark and frightening, Fabio Jr. failed to see the sadistically Zeuslike lightning bolt flying at his solar plexus.
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04-12-2009 at 08:43 PM
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These fellows of disgust - of which timid, squalid proportions infested them like tapeworms whose diet consisted of several bodily attributes per day, as if one had had the fellows compressed like The Terminator in that scene from The Terminator, had one had had James Cameron's budget for The Terminator for one's compression - were regarding themselves fondly feeling proud of themselves guarding the castle well; however, it all came down to the tense moment when the Goblin King would soon arriving have them receive their judgmental paychecks...

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04-14-2009 at 01:16 AM
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Once upon a time, the black bullet was akin to a lumbering llama as it willingly wandered around the rounded room entirely of its own opportunity, pausing only to razingly reflect on the perfect pointlessness of external existence, and finally decided to submit to suicide, before shifting to a shocking shade of silver which mesmerisingly matched the quiet quality of the gun holder's garment which, incidentally, was bought at quite a reasonable price down at a nice little shop which, unfortunately, has since closed down due to the uninterpreted illness of its owner, leaving only the icily inspired inquiry, "Why?".

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04-16-2009 at 01:33 AM
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The bad thief stole away from the gypsy: a plump potato that could cast magic spells on goblins, and a handkerchief; however, he had left one precious thing of value - her telephone...

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04-17-2009 at 04:25 PM
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As he felt his life draining from him like a large amount of water swirling down a drain, or perhaps the remains of a container of milk, long since gone sour, poured out and swirling down a drain, Jason reflected that his life may have been misspent as a drug runner and cockfight organizer, but his death—blood! a large amount of blood swirling down a drain, a much better metaphor—his death, at any rate, would bring it a pleasant note of finality.

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04-19-2009 at 10:00 AM
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Once upon a time, utterly mega-distant in the envelopes of space time, in fact so enormously, utterly ultra-mega-distant that one could question the possibility for any happenings at all, something happened.

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04-21-2009 at 03:25 PM
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For weeks he wondered, puzzled, thought, racked his (extremely crowded) brains; the deadline was fast approaching, yet no inspiration came.

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04-22-2009 at 12:40 AM
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With a loud blast, slash, jab another slash and another jab our hero turns as he reaches for the last trick he has up his sleeve when suddenly it seems like the ceiling has fallen in on him.

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04-22-2009 at 09:06 AM
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Time works wonders, and Helen was hoping both for and against hope that the gods would wisely choose this momentous moment to strike (or at least bowl over) her most nightmarish adversary.

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04-22-2009 at 02:50 PM
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He knew the end was drawing near as the protesters gathered, surrounding the residence with signs and angry chants of "What is war good for?".

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04-23-2009 at 07:45 PM
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The rain slashed him as ice cold knive ripping throught soft butter in an oven, which was over 100 degrees C, as the dragon, with its shining black smooth dark scales, lunged at him.

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04-23-2009 at 09:08 PM
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Haxar grunted like an electric minotaur with flat batteries, clenched his sneering, wrinkled, battle-scarred, pug-shaped, scintillescent face into a grimace resembling a Rottweiler who has just discovered that its owner has taken the next-door neighbour's poodle on holiday by mistake, lifted his trusty and well-worn battle-axe, which was the weight of a fat child or an anorexic teenager (one not wearing too much jewellery), high over his head as easily as a mathematician lifts his pencil after proving a theorem that has baffled his colleagues and intellectual forebears for centuries, and charged pell-mell at the approaching enemy trained lobsters.

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04-24-2009 at 01:23 AM
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There would be nobody left to save the orphanage, for like a bullet through a man's heart, the bullet pierced Abercrombie's heart like hot metal through flesh, and and he was killed until he was utterly dead; the orphanage would not be saved.

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