underscorpion
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File: Luigis Story Demo.drh (7.8 KB)
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Hello.
This is my first rpg hold (demo). It's short and easy yet, but I decided to post it. I want you to tell me what am I doig good and wrong (I know, I know, not many choices but I'm not very good at this and I like holds with lot of scripting ) So, enjoy!

PS Luigi is a stalwart from Italian

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I'm one of the polish DROD players

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[Last edited by underscorpion at 10-06-2008 07:03 PM]

zex20913
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A couple of things.

1. The first "choice" is poorly done--it has an immediate "Sigh. I'll go back and restore now" effect.

2. It's really easy to exploit the pickaxe in the brain room.

3. Give us ending stairs!

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underscorpion
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Sorry for late reply.
1. Done. ("wrong" paths with gems and health potions)
2. Done. It's in new secret room.
3. Done.

I will make more rooms (levels?) and post a new version

PS Only 1 reply?

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I'm one of the polish DROD players

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[Last edited by underscorpion at 10-09-2008 05:48 PM]

Blondbeard
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Hmm... I found the hold wierd. No challange, wierd story, anoying forced choises without knowing what lay ahead.

What makes the hold enjoyable in your own opinion?

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[Last edited by Blondbeard at 10-10-2008 11:42 AM]